And so Seamus gave me a challenge. He challenged me to write a like series once a week. And so I came up with a short series that will post once a week, each episode running under five minutes. The goal is to write something very short that is also concise and clever and just plain god. Obviously comments always help. So tell me what you think and maybe if you have any ideas or suggestions abiut what you would like to see happen then speak up.
So here is the first installment of, "The Vail". I hope you guys enjoy and keep coming back for more.
The Vail
by Joey Pettine
Episode One: The Visitor
(It is a late evening. ANDY VAIL sits in a dark office working diligently at his desk, a sole lamp his only illumination. He rubs his eyes, returns to the work, cranks the calculators, and then rubs his eyes once more, restarting the cycle. It is work time, it is always work time. A woman, NANCY VAIL, Andy's sister in law, enters from the shadows offstage. Her entire front is covered with blood, which does not seem to bother her. Her face is neutral but her eyes direct, she has a goal. She approaches Andy's desk, never taking her eyes off him. Andy only notices her when she is directly in front of him. He looks up quickly, does a bit of a double take, and looks surprised. He stops what he is doing, standing as if to come around and hug her.)
ANDY
Nan? I didn’t hear you come in.
NANCY
I have a limited amount of time, Andrew. You must listen.
(She sits as she says this, moving stiffly as if this conversation had been rehearsed and it was her cue to take a seat. Andy retakes his seat, concerned.)
ANDY
What’s wrong?
NANCY
Once, you saved my life. I feel inclined, as your friend, to try to do the same for you.
ANDY
Nancy, what are you talking about?
(Nancy seems minutely hurt.)
NANCY
You don’t recognize me yet. You will now.
ANDY
Excuse me?
NANCY
You haven’t noticed my clothing either.
(Only at that moment does Andy seem to notice the torrents of blood. His face becomes a tableau of shock and worry. He stands so quickly that he knocks his chair over.)
ANDY
Oh, my God! Nancy, we have to get you to the hospital.
NANCY
There is no need.
(He is so worried it borders on panic.)
ANDY
Jesus Christ, you’re bleeding everywhere! Did Mike do this? Is this about—
NANCY
I am unharmed. Conversely, your brother Michael, the man who would be my husband, is murdered.
(Every emotion Andy had turns suddenly to silent shock. When he speaks it is quiet and slow, as if trying to keep Nancy calm. His face is disbelieving yet somewhat understanding.)
ANDY
Murdered?
NANCY
His blood is on my hands.
ANDY
Nancy, what happened?
NANCY
In three minutes you will receive a phone call that will ruin your life forever. Allow it to ring.
ANDY
A call?
NANCY
From the police. But you already know your brother is deceased. There is nothing you can do.
ANDY
I—
NANCY
Let the phone ring. If you answer it, you will never be able to return to the existence you know now. I am giving you this choice.
ANDY
Is this some joke? This isn’t funny.
(Nancy stands.)
NANCY
I agree. This is not for amusement.
ANDY
Mike’s dead?
(Nancy seems sorry for Andy.)
NANCY
Yes. I apologize. I know your relationship was strained but this is not how it should have finished.
(Nancy turns to leave. Andy still seems in shock.)
ANDY
Where are you going?
(Nancy turns back just before she exits.)
NANCY
I know you better than you realize, Andrew. I know you will try to make this right. That is what pains me. To see your love be your undoing.
ANDY
Nancy.
NANCY
I suppose I knew my visit could not stop you. Perhaps it was only a veiled excuse to see you one final time. You will find me at the local train station when you need to. But I will be gone. Goodbye, friend.
(Nancy exits, leaving Andy puzzled. He looks around, as if looking for an audience secretly laughing at his confusion. He sets up his chair and returns to his seat, mystified. The phone rings. Andy stares at it as if finally understanding. The phone continues to ring as we fade to black.)

Fugitive narrative! YEEEEAAH!
ReplyDeleteDefinitely intrigued to see where this is going. My visit to dictionary.com tells me that a vail is either an archaic way to say "veil", or a verb meaning to lower something or to doff one's hat. So I expect an abundance of hat doffings in entries to come.
But yeah, if this is heading in a classic Hulk kind of direction, with our man Andy always on the run, then I am unabashedly for it.
For some odd reason I am reminded of Death of a Salesman. Andy is our Willy Loman and Nancy our Linda. I'm interested in reading where this goes.
ReplyDeleteYou set the scene very nicely. I can visualize the setting and the dialogue between Andy and Nancy. I can understand Andy's confusion. I looking forward to reading the rest of this.
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